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, of her split-personality gal Jacky 
Particularly the right Jacky's pose. Oh well. Critique is welcomed I guess!
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As for critique, well, these characters just look so good! But there's definitely something about the one in red's pose, like it's a little stiff. It's like you're trying to make her curve, but at the same time thought against it so it ends up looking like she's in mid leap and about to fall on her face. Maybe if you push her pose more so her line of action is a C-shape? Think Marceline from Adventure Time, who's constantly hovering but is always in that curved position (though her hair really helps to also define that, so that's maybe something to consider in the future when working with long-haired characters). Feel free to exaggerate more. Your girls will stay pretty no matter how far you push their poses and expressions, trust me on that.
You really captured her, dude! ;u;
I need to do your trade already now. grrr haha
Man, thanks! I LOVE IT.